He seemed to just over look her saying, my father used to beat me".

Cute! Loved it!

This was an amazing story!' :D

This story was completly amazing! The intensity of the emotion between the characters made me want to read more and more. The love between Embry and Hailey was a pure love. The hatred between Hailey and her father was so strong that you couldn't wait until you found out that the sick man went to jail. There was never a moment in this story that I was bored. Keep up writing with a heart and soul like this, you will acquire many fans. )

My only suggestion: some grammar and spelling was off, but not to the point you couldn't read it.

I LOVE how you end this story with this song! It's really is a good song for a wonderful story.

Lovely Story, I recently discovered it and was sad to see it end so fast,but it was lovely nonetheless.

Thirteen Reasons Why? I love that book. Ummmmm, try 'Give A Boy a Gun'. Its about two boys who hold up all the kids at their school's prom, and threaten to kill them, but then end up committing suicide.

loved it

bookworm2341

omg awesome story..i really enjoyed reading it...thanx for taking the time to write it..d-.-b...XD

u should have a sequil to 8)

v-girl98

love it so 8)

v-girl98

That was a very nice story...LUV that ending! _
Wat is that song? Keep up the good work! XD

For all we know, she could be afraid of you again," said Quil, I was so ready to punch him in the face.
ROFLMFAO! XD

Great Story so far! I know that you have probably finished Thirteen Reasons Why (which is a great book btw) but some other books that go along with that type of theme are many of Sarah Dessen's novels. There are actually quite a few so I would just look it up, but most of her novels have to do with that. Just Listen by her is probably one of my favorites. Also Jodi Picoult wrote a book along the theme of an abusive boyfriend relationship physically and one that inserted chapters that made you see that it was an emotionally abusive relationship. Those books, respectively, are (i think) Songs of the Humpback Whale (or the Tenth Circle...its been a while) and Nineteen Reasons which is one of my all time favorite books.

aw... there are no words to describe how beautiful that was!i love how you added the song at the are so creative. you should make your own book and publish it. i will be first in line to get it signed! thank you so for lighting up these past few days. i have not had a fight with a friend in such a while(thats saying something to the drama in 5-1) and i will read as many as your stories as possible