Thanks for this story ! ! ! ! !

It was well written and I liked how you had some humour as well. :) The thing I didn't understand was Merlin's doubts, I thought he was worried about the queen/heir thing not only about Arthur accepting him.. So that confused me when he changed his mind.. :P

I loved it so much!
It made totally sense that Arthur would think Merlin didn't want him for being a Pendragon. I loved to finally see one story like that!
This was totally great, and I totally love it! 3

That was beautifully written. I loved all the back and forth, all the persistence of Arthur, all of Merlin's attempts to do the 'right' thing. This was great! I'm adding it to my faves right now!
Thank you.

Made me laugh and I really really enjoyed it

Great story but I had to copy and paste it into Microsoft Word and un bold it because I find it really hard to read in bold. Usually people only use bold for the a/n. But aside from that, great story!

I never thought Merlin would know how to talk dirty...:D

xoxo HinaKicksAss

SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO good. The dirty talk at the end nearly gave me a heartattack, lmao.

I'm so glad that I did not ignore this story, because all letters in bold put me off at first.

You. Are. Good. Nuff said.

How have you only got 10 reviews for this? This is amazing! Brilliant writing, spot on character analysis / lines and pure love for the slash at the end :P

Thank you! xx

THAT WAS GREAT AND FANTASTIC!

wow. great story. thanks. everything was just right :)

Very good fanfic!

Ohh, that was so great. At first I didn't want to read it because it was in bold, but I'm so glad I did. It was well written and had an awesome plot. I love how dedicated Arthur was to Merlin when he was chasing him. My favorite lines where...

“I don’t know what Morgana is talking about either. That was the best kiss ever.”

"And they realise that the stone is glowing in a rich red and as bright as a town fire."

"Side by side they silently watch Sir Gawain and a plain daughter of some obscure lord discover their undying love and grave passion for each other with rather great surprise."

"Merlin is far too scared of women and this one in particular than to dive for them."

" it is painful when we are apart.’"

And this last quote is a real WIN!, "And then it begins to dawn on Merlin. He begins to understand Arthur. It’s not that Arthur can’t forgive Merlin for being magic.

He thinks Merlin cannot forgive Arthur for being a Pendragon.",

Oh, and at the end where Merlin is talking into Arthur's ear? ALL of that was awesome. It was very sexy and hot, especially the "I want to find out if I recognise your smell in the taste of your cum". I read that and I was fanning my self! Well done! I loved it!

XD

very very lovely smut XD

*nosebleeds*