This is so sad. Waaaahhhh! *dissolves into loud sobs*

So good, I liked how you linked the fma and hp characters. On how the homunculi lived and took over the Ministry, Ed being Nicolas' father and many more.

It's kinda disappointing that you stopped working in this fic.

oh God, second chapter made me cry, I'm snuffling right now...

I... heard this once, I don't know where or who from, but it is: 'A parent should never have to bury their child.'

I liked it up until your last chapter, it was too descriptive and detailed, tattoo away from the actual story and made it hard to follow but the first five chapters were pretty good

great story so far do you plan to finish it and what are Ed's thoughts on harry and why has izumi not said any thing.

GOD BLESS YOUR GIRLFRIEND.

Please update Q-Q pretty please?

please update soon! please! this is awesome! I cried so much during the first 2 chapters TTTT sooo good~

Hey, it's me from the last comment.
I'm not done reading your story yet (I'm taking my time 'cause I don't wanna reach the end) but I just noticed that it is not complete and that just can't do! I was sent here by "Gift of the dragons" and her story "Amaranthine" wich was inspired by yours. And first, let me say these FMA/HP crossovers are my guilty pleasure but I almost never read them through to the end because they often get very cliché very fast. (Yeah, I'm a high-standard fic-vore which is presumptuous since I don't write myself because of my poor English. *EXCUSES !*)
Anyway! I was just going to tell "Gift of the Dragons" how happy I was to have stumbled upon her fic (again) and that it definitly was my all-time favorite in this category when I read about you in the author's note.
Yeah. She got dethroned pretty fast!... but I sill love her. Let me give you all the reasons why I adore your story when I'm done reading, but the first chapter could've been a stand-alone and still be everything I ever wanted to read on this website and more.

NOW.

I demand you finish writing this story! Please.

I mean it's only been a year so there's still hope in asking (time flies fast, with real life and stuff). You started this story, and I guess it was to share something that people would enjoy. Well, it is making me very happy and I thank you very much. This story was written by you and it is unique, original, well written, perfectly dosed with angst, and cool as f**k. Now the only way to make it better would be to complete it and nobody but you can do it, that's why I'm asking so heartedly.

Just sayin'
Do what you want with this comment.

Thank you again for sharing your work with us common mortals.
Love from Switzerland!

Wow! This fic is beauty!

cool

one thing in this chapter really jumps out at me, and it's the fact that someone other than myself remembers that Pride is not controlling the shadows and the Selim shape his true body, but that he is the shadows and the Selim shape his shelter that allows him to travel more easily, as well as the location of his stone.

Well, it's past August, but I just found your story and I believe this has some great potential. I can't wait to see how the Trio reacts to Ed and his alchemy. I hope Harry and Ron decide to really study and learn alchemy, it would cause a bunch of chaos, at least. Hope to see a new chapter soon.

D:

Oh... ok then.