Reviews for Exploration
Yuzu Aihara16 chapter 25 . 1/13/2019
I really Hit a Neutral... im not sure wheather to be sad or happy this was a great fic im speechless
YuzuAihara16 chapter 25 . 1/13/2019
I really Hit a Neutral i dont know whether to be sad or happy this fic was amazing the best one ive ever read im speechless if you actually owned naruto and made an anime adaptation this would be the best anime i would gather the dragon balls just to make you the owner of naruto even if it meant my death and id watch it in the next life.
The Sixtth Degree chapter 25 . 4/23/2018
It's not often that I find a story that grabs me enough to have me see it through to the end, especially one this long... you've done something very special here. Thank you!
Guest chapter 25 . 3/23/2017
I loved the story. I never knew where it was going
cbsloggingin chapter 2 . 1/29/2016
i just wanted to say that media has a large impact on how we view homosexuals. I myself am a lesbian, and admittedly used to see bisexuals the same, as i became more involved in the LGBT community, i realised this is not the case whatsoever. Bisexuals are like homosexuals who are like everyone else, I realised the media, who had overly sexualised bisexuals in particular, had encouraged this very much incorrect assumptionn
Sunahu chapter 25 . 10/4/2015
Omg yessss!
I honestly wasn't sure what to expect from the last chapter after Sakura and Ino broke up, but I am sooo happy that she ended up with Rina! The entire time I was like "Rina's so nice, why can't she just be with her?".

Still, I love the path that each of them took, because unfortunately, that's just how life works. It takes all these twists and turns that you don't expect, but as long as you push forward, I full heartily believe you will end up where you belong. Obviously it doesn't mean that heartache won't happen, but everyone has a place in the world as long as you're patient.

This was my first yuri (I've only recently began looking into yaoi so I wanted to give yuri a chance too). Both realms are different, but I'm glad I found this!
Guest chapter 25 . 5/3/2015
Gua fue una gran trama en la historia la verdad es que si . Me gusto el final no seria correto si se queda con ino rina siempre estubo para ella desde el primer momento
Polyphemos chapter 24 . 6/30/2014
Ino is a selfish and stupid bitch.
Polyphemos chapter 23 . 6/30/2014
Such a bad person. Just an awful human being.
Polyphemos chapter 21 . 6/30/2014
Ino is such a shitty human being.
SereneJourney chapter 25 . 4/27/2014
So I'm going to put aside the fact that I hate you a little bit right now and give you the downs first, then the ups. Once again, I apologize for anything I've done to bother you.

Cons:
-Dialogue was mildly confusing at some points.
-Story often felt kind of rushed, and maybe the bad end of Sakura's and Ino's lives were overdone a little. I know people have bad times, and I know that people with bad pasts and bad interactions sometimes end up like that, but... I don't really know how to say it. It felt kinda off to me, maybe too much focus on the negativity.
-(PS: You made me upset with you a little since I was looking for a happy SakuIno fic. D:)

Pros:
-Great storytelling.
-The characters were well thought-out and the world flowed smoothly.
-You managed to keep my attention for all 69,014 words. An impressive feat. This means that you're good at putting in enough to keep the reader interested, but a slight warning is not to overdo it and make it seem, well, overdone.
-It's genuinely likable. Annoyingly sad and heart wrenching, yes, but it is an enjoyable read. Among the best I've seen on this site so far.

I'm going to go cool off by beating on a punching bag for a while. Maybe I won't break this one. You're really a wonderful author, and I honestly hope you write some new stories. Maybe try and throw in a happy one, eh? (Humorous tones don't carry well in text, my apologies.) Sorry for bothering you with all these reviews, and this one is... well, damn long.

Thank you very much for the wondrous story,
-Kyle
SereneJourney chapter 5 . 4/27/2014
So I wrote a thing after reading just this much of this. You broke my writer's block and I'm incredibly thankful!

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR GIVING ME INSPIRATION!
-Kyle
SereneJourney chapter 4 . 4/27/2014
Only negative comment so far is maybe an overuse of the word "uber."
I'm sorry to say I'll be keeping positive comments for the last chapter, as there are quite a few.
Thanks again for the wonderful story,
-Kyle
SereneJourney chapter 2 . 4/27/2014
Yo, I know this fic is done and all, but I hope you're fine if I stick a review here every now and then! I'm doing... I guess you could say research... for a fic of my own. That's beside the point.
I always stick at least one review on every story I read and give my opinions, suggestions. I don't necessarily think I'm better than everyone else, but I know it helps me when people do that. Sorry if it bothers you.
Anyways!
Story's great so far. Non-canon often has a lot of flaws, but this is so far really good in terms of universe. Interested to see how the story will play out. Might be done in a few hours if the quality continues. Screw finals!

Sorry for the long review, I guess!
Thanks for the story,
-Kyle
Zurrick chapter 25 . 3/31/2014
Very very good.
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