Reviews for Close Quarters
Ma'Shayla chapter 9 . 9/15/2015
Sexual. But Amazing
d-kronk chapter 9 . 1/19/2013
Sleep is over-rated. This was a much better way to spend the one night before they had to leave for a case again. Great fic! Looking forward to reading more from you.
d-kronk chapter 8 . 1/19/2013
I love that JJ set them up. :-) That's great and I really like them slowly getting back at ease with each other. Hopefully, now that they are heading home, they can continue this forward progression.
d-kronk chapter 7 . 1/19/2013
That was one heck of a kiss. :-) I'm glad he can't resist Pen and she was able to get her good night kiss. Hopefully going for his run will give him a chance to think a bit.
d-kronk chapter 6 . 1/19/2013
Aww... Derek's thoughts in this are so sad. Great, but sad. I hope Penelope can convince him that they have the chance of becoming more.
d-kronk chapter 5 . 1/19/2013
Great chapter! I'm glad that Derek knows about her and Kevin and I really like him being mad for not saying anything. Then his anger when she runs is great, but I love that she is forcing him to talk to her and the kiss was great.
d-kronk chapter 4 . 1/19/2013
Man... they haven't broke yet, but it's got to be close. I like that Pen heard him dreaming about her and Derek's thoughts when he woke up. I really love the end of this, but thinking of her in a wedding gown, that's great.
d-kronk chapter 3 . 1/19/2013
I really like the sexual tension between the two of them in this chapter... slowly building. I'm looking forward to the point when one of them can't take it anymore. :-)
d-kronk chapter 2 . 1/19/2013
Love this! I really love them both at the adjoining door at the same time and Penelope just falling into his arms. Then her overhearing Derek in the shower. I like that she couldn't not tell JJ what happened. Looking forward to reading more of this.
d-kronk chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
Great start! Hopefully they won't let their minds get in the way of what they want.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
Laughing out loudYAY
missbelab chapter 4 . 11/10/2011
Very hot! I love them!
PaceyW'sgirl chapter 9 . 10/21/2010
great story
onetreefan chapter 9 . 6/30/2010
soooo good!
csimesser1 chapter 9 . 4/10/2010
that was great loved it
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