Do you have any more stories? Because I absolutely loved this one

I love this story and I was wondering if you had any more stories on here?

TIME TO KILL A BITCH

I loved the ending but the rest didn't make sense. But i can definitely tell you your last words were amazing

0.0 But Gee was so innocent! Well, his hands were clean, at least.

Okay,I tried to find the good in this story but..the grammar is..really bad. And the first chapters were waayyyy too fast.
From,'Im not gay' to 'I might like you' to 'I love you' with in the first two chapters. Also,the rest of the story is quite perdictable.
Sorry..

I suggest next time you need to put a number, you type it and not use the actual number.

I think the parents reactions were a little to predictable.

I must say, this chapter is a little to fast paced. So far, I am up to chaptet 3. Make sure, my love, to spell check.

This is such a good story, but I think it needed to be better written, and a bit more detail.

I think that you should try to use "these" more. It's very hard too read with just '. It's a good story, but I wish that it was easier to read.

unrealistically fastpaced and insanely farfetched. nice ideas though. just need s more though and filler.

Hey, this was a really cool fanfic but i was just thinking that the last two paragraphs or so would make really good lyrics to a sort of punk rock song with a grungey edge...just thought i'd say cause it just sounded really cool when i read it.
In case you're wondering, these are the ones i was talking about:
We've never been caught; we're not on the run. We have nothing and no one to run from. We're safe now, I guess. We almost died. Well…. I'm not sure if we almost died of if we are dead. I can't tell… It's painful to tell you this… that this here is how the story ends. I bid you farewell with a strum of a guitar and a bang of a drum. Give me blood, your poison and run away with me any time you want. We'll hide from the scarecrow if you stay. Stay by my side. And you never give in.
I can't give you anymore advice, my time is up. I guess I am dead. I'm nothing more to you. We're nothing more to anyone. Fuck my life, and save me from my death, the death that happened years ago. I can hardly remember a thing... nothing makes sense.
But I'm venomous.
Mess with me, sugar.
And I...
I Will Kill You.
Understand?

omg my name is nikki but im only 11

This is retarded. Why would teenagers have guns?