thank you for a beautiful story and yes it made me cry

I wasn’t expecting that ending at all! You’re a really good writer! Thank you!

Beautiful Story ... Just amazing ...

i cried...omg.. :'( i didnt see this ending...i thought Alice would die.

Bad.

HOW COULD YOU KILL EDWARD OFF LIKE THAT ! !

Was not expecting the ending but loved every sad minute of it. I am most definitely crying. Wonderfully written.

Oh.. My.. Lord, woman... U got me good.
This was just lovely & heartbreaking, which is hard to pull off.
- & the twist! (The one in my head, anyway)- Becuz I was mourning Alice before she was gone, thinking Bella would get her heart.
... U sneaky lil devil. - NeVeR saw the actual outcome coming.
This is a precious story.
Great job, & thank u for sharing ur talent.

This was a very tragic story and I hate you for killing Edward but I loved it anyway . . . Lovely, heartbreaking story! I'd love to read any more of your one-shots! Thanks for posting! You're a great writer (even if you did kill Edward *sniff, sniff*)

I usally don't even tear up reading or watching sad things, but I sure as hell cried durning this.

This story just shows that no one can control life or death. I loved your story.

Actually no I hated it. The story broke my heart. I'm crying right now. I should have known not to read a tragedy.

god, Im crying...

You're right, I am crying. Great story!

Noooooo! *sniffle* Very well written. But for the sake of my sanity and to stop the waterworks, I'm going to pretend that they all eventually meet up in heaven and end up happy

This broke my heart! I loved it so much and I cried at the end! The story is amazing!