Ugh. I just read ur story. It's soooo beautiful and sad. Only amazing writers like u could bring me to tears. Xx

why is it so sad! :*( this is the only love story that made me cry i was about to rooll oof my bed too lock my door and go back onto my bed and cry right to my pillow why is it sad and he never had a tomour in the movie by the way:( you broke her heart for nothing yu heartbreaker but still too drama is why i also do not like so much so do not be surprised

You are truly one of the most talented writers on this site you can bring me to tears I had a pain in my heart reading this I felt like I was mitchie please write more! Anything smitchie would be really cool :)

Wow...that was deep. :( I loved it!

so sad, but sooo sweet! great job!

:,( Well done! Now I'm officialy crying... I can't see my keyboard anymore... I was thinking why she didn't killed herself and that's when I knew she was pregnant, she was always saying death was her path to him so I knew something from him was keeping her on earth. I just knew she was pregnant, that's good now she has someone to love as much as she loves shane. A child from him is just perfect! I'm actually happy with the ending, i felt much better after that I can't deny it was a very sad fanfic, it gor my crying for crying out loud! ;D I love your writing, can't wait for the next chapter of TIOS, it's baby alert there to ;) x

Beautiful. sad but beautiful. x

awwww. i knew you were going to make mitchie have a baby without shane :'(.

That was sad. It was good though!

HEY!

Anyways...

Again like I said, I literally cried when I read this. It's amazing cause i don't normally cry when I read fanfics, but this one, I was in floods of tears. Cause you know Mitchie was so helpless and she couldn't do anything... That's one of the worst feelings ever.

I was glad though in the end that she was pregnant. It kind of made it bitter sweet.

I love this, as always.

Oh and by the way in the other review of your newest oneshot, I meant to add that I would love to see shane's reaction after she died... that would be cool to read

:)

-Em

wow! I cried! you have a gift!

please write more onje shots, your really good! dont get me wrong, i LOVE your trilogy! but this was so goD!

Gr. It actually made me cry so much...you're so mean for killing Shane! :'( God, possibly THE most moving and sadest one shot I have ever read :( good job (I would put a smiley face here, bu it seems inappropriate after such a sad story lmao).

I'm actually crying. Like tears and all the stuff. That was amazing; Bravo ;)

Oh god. This was probably one of the best stories you've ever written. Even if it's just a one-shot. I was crying like a baby at the end. It was just so amazing and it made me feel like I was in Mitchies position. The triology can't compete with anything cause it's great, but out of every thing else on fanfiction, this was one of the best things I've ever read.

I am so sad and teary eyed right now. That was absolutely amazing and I loved every second reading it. Even though it was completely heart-breaking ')

Oh my gosh you made me cry! I'm not even kidding I'm wiping tears away as I write this. That's was possibly the saddest thing I've ever read, I can't believe he died. Then just as I'm taking a breath and thinking it's okay it's just a story, I learn the Mitchie's pregnant? Don't get me wrong I LOVED it! It was just really sad but still AMAZING! Just please don't make SHane die in TIOS, I don't think I could handle it, haha. Seriously though you did an amazing job! You should write one-shots more often but next time make it a happy one please, lol.

I really, truly loved this one-shot. You have a serious gift when it comes to the written word miss JayBee!

~Amber.