it was nice and all but it went by too fast, like you should add more detail, like instead of saying nico’s stomach hurt you could say, “ it felt like the romans and Greeks were having a battle in his stomach.” Other then that it was well written.

love it

Poisidon SHIPS IT!

lol I laughed so hard when hades said where nico's temper come from

Amazing

Damn you must have a lot of free time. Awesome story!

Cat-angels, really? I mean I get angle wings. Or cat ears but togeather. . . Isn't sort of an oxymoron? Angles have wings of a bird, cats eats birds. . .so shouln't nico sort of fight himself. Cat-angels, REALLY? But its really not a bad story, but cat-angels.

Oh snap! Annabeth! Dis is not gud! I hope Nico dos not try to keel her

Oh, dear. Nick is in some deep shite. And percy is just over here like WTF IS GOIN ON!?

hi. ive just finished reading the first chapter of this story, and currently looking through the comments. the plot seems relatively interesting, and im excited to see what happens next, but the grammar is irking me quite a bit. the errors are pretty obvious to a reader, and stands out quite a bit, especially the 'cat-angles' versus 'cat-angels' error. i have yo say though, the mental image of a 'cat-angle' is indeniably amusing. just letting you know that if possible, proof-read your work before uploading it! yup. :)

( uncapitalized words were on purpose. obviously. )

- PotatoesSwimmingInTheDark

Um through this entire story u called them cat angles did u mean angels?

I loved your story! I've always loved hybrid story's, keep writing!
Percy x

The end.

The best book ever!

I totally loved this story. It was kind of cute and wild at the same time since Nico was so overprotective of Percy. Though, I was really hoping for the lemon. Do you think you can make an extra chapter? I just really feel like it should have one because of all the suggestive things Nico did.