I have always wondered about the situation with Hinata. Hitomi being dead just after she had a second child was always sketchy as fuck to me. She has two kids and just dies from an "unknown illness" when any semi-competent medic-nin probably would have been able to heal her. Just like Tsunade did here. Thanks for putting that there.

i hope Naruto become more realistic not egoistial with his nonsentical words,, always believe his words are true

HInata, Hanabi, FemHaku(not justify he not girl),, TEmari, Shizune, Maybe Tsunade (so his child pure uzumaki),

oh oki see now it just keep getting better but i want to see 13yr old naruto also kimimaru shouldnt de-age he should be a jonin instructor or mabye kakashi should join the villiage konoha is slowly losing power konoha is just gonna become a smalll village and the sound will become the konoha basically a swutch XD

the land of rice paddies im just gonna keep calling it the villiage hidden in the sound but still

ok this started a pretty decent i will admit not the greatest thing in the world but very good 3\5 for now

That age Jutsu is so freaking hilarious.

Such a great story but then you go and do weird things. A serious girlfriend at 9-10 years old?

I hope there is a second part to this

I know I’m super late but Kami I hope there are lemons

Muy bueno apenas voy por el 15 pero esta muy bueno y si sigue abierto los espacios para las novias poner a samui

This story is a fun idea, but...I'm done.

Orochimaru saying "No sweat." was the straw that broke the camels back. Orochimaru is supposed to be refined, analytical, and a scientist. He's not supposed to sound like a neighbourhood thug, saying things like "No sweat.", nor is he meant to be confused by such a simple plan as "Don't tell Naruto that he is Minato's son.".

He's supposed to be intelligent, but he doesn't realize why telling a child that they are the son of a Shinobi, one hated by those who would seek to eliminate his offspring, is a bad idea.

So, a fun idea, but...silly little things just piled up and made me give up trying to read this. I hope you have a good time writing though!

yo how old is this story?

Wait. So this guy just threw around syringes at the kids and Orochimaru was standing around doing nothing? I can understand the first one being a surprise, but he could have easily stopped the other ones...

Hey so I'm drawing a blank about the previous few chapters but in #63 it jumped out at me how you refer to Gaara as "the racoon-eyed boy". Shouldn't that be incorrect since he no longer suffers from acute chronic insomnia since Jiraiya fixed his seal all those years ago just like how you previously mentioned, when the suna team showed up at kanoha for the exam, he doesn't have the love character on his forehead for the same reason?