i love this! captures their chemistry so well, even though they're inside their mechas! hahaha

short, but intoxicating. ever thought about writing longer story? without OCs, I mean?

Wow, I've never seen battle portrayed as poetically as you did. You pulled it off. I'm totally blown away.

You know, I usually am of mixed opinion about Kallen/Gino, possibly because I'm a bit of a Gino/Suzaku fan... or a Kallen/Suzaku fan. But in code geass, all pairings are obvious to the devoted fsn (and if not, the fanservice is, lol)

I thought your writing was really lovely, captured Gino (too much amotion, not much thought) and Kallen (too mch history and anger - not enough present) perfectly :)

Nice writing. It was fluid.

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Beautifully written. The wording and style is elegant and sweeps you along - something you never quite expect for a character like Gino. Simply fanscinating.