Great story!

Me encantó tu historia, tienes mucho talento. Odie a Bella, como se le ocurrió volver con Edward solo porque tenían 6 años juntos, tuvo suerte de que Jake la perdono y por cierto, muy rápidamente, yo la hubiera hecho sufrir un poquito. Realmente disfruté la lectura.

Why is it that everyone who writes this twilite fic never can see Bella having to pay for her mistakes? Her sick, twisted choices. Someone else has to pay the freight for her dumps Jake, runs back to Edward. When it does not work out back to Jake she goes. Jake is unable to move on is hellbent on self destruction and when Bella shiws up he immediately forgets what she did or at best holds her accountable for oh maybe 5 minutes before he is falling all over himself to let Bella deal he pain again. This is the basic plot for countless numbers of tw-fic. I can count on my hands the number of truly original stories in this universe...and I am sorry to say this is not one of them.

So now what? You make Jake look like a fool and take this worthless peice of shit back. Of course you will. Every last bit of this has been predictable and boring AS IN B-O-R-I-N-G. Why cant some of the "writers" come up with something hmmm...lets say.. Oh... original? Yeah, thats it original.
BTW original is what this is not.

Its a real love fest...when does Bella throw him under the bus? Its got to happen seeing as this is Bella and Bella is only capable of destruction.

Uhh that was just...bad. Maybe you shouldnt ask for reviews?

Was that supposed to be sexy. I wonder why Bella has such a difficult time being honest emotionally or otherwise. I can never get behind this character. Bella is like the worst thing that could possibly ever happen to jake. Cant stand her

Okaaay then. I can see whats coming here. Jake is about to be used as Bellas doormat. He is around Bella for a few after a decade or so and is blithering fool for a souless wackey female like Bella. Makes all kinds of sense...wel no it really doesn't but... The worse Bella treats Jake the harder he will try. Bella has no use for a real man. A man who is honest, accepts her for who she is and treats her like an equal? Bella has zero use for someone like that. Someone like that would get in the way of her being selfish and caring about just herself. Wait...why did I start reading this trainwreck? Somebody please, tell me...

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Uhh this story is soo going to put me to sleep. Bella screwed Jake over? No surprise there.
The problem is nobody ever writes a version of Bella that we can care about or that anybody would want to see Jacob with. She is weak whinny, conniving and deceitful. Jacob deserves better.

This will be bad. 4 Jacob at least because more than likely boy wonder will be able 2 win her back and all those magical days she has spent with Jake will be a distant memory that she would probably 4get

God damn I wouldn't have been able 2 resist that boy either.

I really wouldn't knw what 2 say either. I would need the time 2 acclimate and process what I would say 2 Ted.

It was good super hot, but it could have been hotter if u went into detail and were a little more expressive. And oh God ewww 2 the convo between her and Charlie.

I liked it actually. It let us see Bea in a light where she wasn't influenced by Ted and she got 2 be herself in a uninhibited manner. She just got 2 have fun. Which it seems she doesn't do very often.