This one was amazing. There is a joy in simplicity, and this is one of the better melodramas I've seen. Killing the kids instead of giving them unrelated scholarships, or finding other subtle (and iuseful/i) ways to redirect them would be smarter, but Peggy Susie iis/i crazy.

This is honestly one of my favorite pieces of fiction ever. It makes me cry every single time. Even after reading and re-reading and re-reading it.

Even more than HPMOR, it gives me something to look up to. I have had very few heroes in my life, but susie derkins is one of them.

Your fan-fictions are by and large my main inspiration to start writing myself. I determine myself to write as well as you.

It's been a while, but I still love this. Always worth the time to re-read.

Amazing.

okay, didn't see that punchline coming. Cheers.

I did not see that coming XD

AWESOME! Is there more of this? :D

Heh. Cute. I caught on when she wrote on the side of the Box to make it work.

It would be interesting to see more of this.

Wow...this is the best "stealth" parody I've ever read! I have no doubt that, were you to continue this, it would make an enjoyable read.

wish you continue the fic

I find it funny that the paragraph that starts "She hadn't thought it would work, to be honest" - perfectly fits both Calvin&Hobbes and Doctor Who canon. (S4E11, Turn Left)

Such a great twist - so VERY much written in such a short story. Genius.

Excellent work. Also, you've earned a special place in hell for created this.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAA!
YOU Sir, are BRILLIANT! :D