I think you are a great author. I especially like how you went out of your way to explain things and situations at the bottom of the page. Keep the stories coming

Definitely a more serious take on "the talk" compared to other fan fiction, which are usually written with humour in mind. Definitely a good read and I liked how you incorporated the survivor's point of view of rape and sexual assault.

This puts Itachi’s Tsukuyomi in a different light...

Thus story is short and unique in its on way

Just when kakashi set aside his eggplant i remembered MY EGGPLANT I BOUGHT LAST WEEK! I HAVEN'T COOKED IT YET. I hope it's not spoiled yet

Anyway, good fic. So rational.

That was a very good way of winding things all up!

I love the concept of that shinobi restaurant.

Huh, that WOULD make sense, if his normal eye was swollen shut, that he'd be essentially blind. And yet I have NEVER come across that concept in fic before! Holy cow. Kudos to you, my good sir/madam/other.

Good point, about how you should never be ashamed of having suffered something; but you can still have other things around the event that you should totally be ashamed of.

This was a good fic! With excellent suspension. I especially liked the the twist at the end!

good tale.

*sighs in relief that Sakura hadn't been directly traumatized*

The conversation between Iruka-zensei & Kakashi is very eye-opening.

Everyone is completely In-Character, and this fic is very interesting! ...In spite of the uncomfortable topic.

awesome

You are seriously one of the most talented writers I've ever come across. Never once in the story did I feel ashamed or awakwardness. You need a lot of maturity and sensitivity to write a whole 4 chapter story about on in. And adding to that ninja logic was pure genius. Thank you so much for writing this.