So cute! I loved every bit of it. One tiny thing that doesn't even matter though, Riku has light blue eyes. Not green... but otherwise this was just so great!

:D Omg great, great!
'And the rest, my friends, is history'
XD

This was a good oneshot! Nice work!

It was a cool touch, having riku read sora's thoughts then kiss him.

Very sweet.

I loved it - Hehe Sora called riku a girl

awwww this is really sweet and funny :D i really like this :D

No one has reviewed this...no one? D: It was so pretty. And cute. And Soriku. and. and. ~fangirls~ Loved it. love, love, love. ~Gives you big hug and sea-salt ice-cream~

I want Sora, too. ): If only.

Only two things I want to point out. When you were writing about what Sora was writing, it was kind of strange to switch back to real life because you didn't use anything to signify that Sora was no longer writing and was instead actually talking to Riku.

Second, Riku's hair is silver. ~sniffles~ silver. but i'll let you off cuz your story was just that adorable.

;_; fav'd.