How did I not know you wrote as well? *face palm*

I really liked this, exploring the way you fall in love with a person rather than their looks. And that who they are makes them beautiful in your eyes. And this way it makes Alistair seem a lot more mature than he comes across some times - which makes me very happy.

I love the fact that the Warden here is pretty much fearless, rough, and pretty much enjoys fighting. The way that you wrote it made for a very believable story of how Alistair could fall in love with her and her personality.

Wow. Love the humour plus romantic nuances. '...he stopped talking, because her calloused hands had pulled his face to hers and her chapped lips were crushed against his and Maker, he was a lucky man.' That was the best part. The oxymoron of something normally squick to generally appealing is interesting.

Very sweet, and nice for the Warden to be beautiful because of who she is and not what she looks like

I loved this. Definitely a favorite of mine.

It's so different from the other Alistair/PC stories. I love how his point of view changed about her from beginning to the end. And the ending was great. Epic.

Short and eloquent and oh so beautifully written. Not only was your PC a bit more interesting than the standard easygoing playful flirty PC, but the development was believable and the style was absolutely delightful to read. :)

Nice.

Aww, this was beautiful and very descriptive. I love how his view on her changes like it has. It’s a nice refresh from the usual ‘instantly in love’ stuff I’ve come across - Really glad this was recommended to me!

Beautiful! Having a rough day at work, you just made it so much better!

Very well written! Love the way you walked me through his feelings, how things started to change. It really drew me in!