So everybody has naruto blood sigh

cool

This really should have a better rating. Sure there are a lot of grammatical errors, but most are easily fixed with a spellcheck. It was wholesome to read this, as as the reader, I thank you for this journey.
To future readers: If your looking through the reviews thinking about reading this, do so, it really is a gem hidden in the sand. Dunno why it doesn't have a better rating.

Loved the interaction between Magneto Naruto.

Right now I would like the kyuubi to go on a rampage and tear Dr Strange and his lackeys limb from limb.
Don't know why, but I just got sudden and irrational dislike for Dr Strange and his Minions.
Maybe it's because of the way they are acting, like smug and arrogant. Or maybe because how Wong-Pong-Chong decided to violate a 14 year old kids mind. Not sure.

I hope Dr Strange and that old strange Chinese old man gets good spanking and thrashing. Their becoming increasingly annoying character. Assholes.

Nope nope nope nope nope. Kyuubi can kick naruto out his mindscape but ALLOWS charles to enter. Fuck off. Fuck your story and Fuck you. Ridiculous. kill yourself

A fantastic story.

So, I loved the way Naruto was introduced to them. The fight against Sasuke shows exactly what he is capable of and what he is willing to do. Much different compared to most fics.

About the Japanese, instead of potentially butchering it you could have written it as Italics in English, just explain in your Authors note or recognition of the language in Logans thoughts.

Lol, the Sasukes thought about using the Rasengan has not been fixed...

For having 2 Beta Readers there are ALOT of grammar mistakes. Easily overlooked though.

well I haven't noticed myself noticing any bad grammar. I've been laughing too much.

I'm gonna keep reading, and hope the grammar gets better.

at this point, I don't think I can read any further. The Story started good but it went downhill when we barely see Naruto. Mostly this fic Is about XMEN when it should be about Xmen interaction with Naruto or vice versa.

Naruto already addressed that he is an orphan few chapters back

I just hate it when fanfic writers change Naruto's clothing. Aside from the fact that its hard to change my imagination that always associate Naruto to Orange, there's no valid reason for that change too. Easy or not to track, but NARUTO survive for years wearing it. for me its like taking away Naruto's signature.