Great story Idea and perfect execution. Can't wait for the rest of the story
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Very well done! i greatly enjoy this story and how it is going. The Dokushu bloodline is a unique twist on things and I like it. I hope all is well with you in the current climate and hope to see more in the future. I understand the reasoning for the loss of your muse and I hope it ends OK but at the end of the day this is your project and as much as I enjoy your work, it is YOUR work. As I said earlier, I hope to see more but I understand your reasoning. Continue the good work

What character inspired Naruto's abilities?

Lol. Great chapter!

so anko is a pedo in this story ... yup no more for me

Amigo gran historia y la evolución de esta ya sea por la trama y la calidad de escritura que fue mejorando constantemente, aunque hayan dejado varios puntos de hace por ejemplo derrotar más fácil a gaara, el entrenador de jiraiya fue más enserio, que fue realmente emocionante ya lo dividió Bien con con anko para darle tiempo de perversión jajajajaja. Además fue brillante su inclusión de raikage para una rara pero ingeniosa manera de interferir con la invasión. Pero bueno espero con ansias el próximo capítulo pero por favor no agregaría muchas chicas al a harem que sean máximo 5 nomas.
PD ¿Cómo vas a manejar los eventos de tsunade? Además con el hijo de naruto transformaría a Minato como abuelo y este como ver a jiraiya como un padre sería el bisabuelo y sarutobi en el tatarabuelo o no jajajajaja

Another great chapter! I was wondering if you had thought about Naruto using his chakra poison to remove curse marks? Or at least Orochimaru's soul piece from it.

I'm enjoying the story, but I find the dialogue to be a bit confusing sometimes; you'll have multiple people talking within the same paragraph.

Glad to see the end of the chuunin exams. 9 chapters was a bit much, but looking forward to moving forward

Please please please tell me you didn’t script out every match

Please tell me you aren’t taking away his shadow clones

the interaction between Naruto and Gaara reminds me of a Mortal Kombat entry diouloge

Good ending, I wonder how Gaara will deal with the aftermath of this fight. I mean he just got whooped and nearly died, might make him even crazier which would be crazy to see how Suna would handle that especially since his father the man who usually stops him is dead.

any one else notice sasuke is so late that he never even showed to get disqualified he also missed the invasion

why are they saying damn every time something does not work