Very nice first chapter I like the way you write, very easy to follow and down to earth, so to speak. Anyway will try to read more even though I've never watched this series. I did look it up though and it seems like something I would watch. Anyway back to the writing board I go. Gotta get out another chappie before I fall out. xD

Oh, I didn't just enjoy this, I loved it! Haa! Especially the ending... a happy ending for our heroes... and a not-so-happy one for our favorite Raptors... except for Lugey, of course. Seems he got his own happy ending! Haha! I get the feeling that the cure won't work on him, too...

Thank you for this hilarious, fun, awesome SH fic!

Hahahaha! I... oh, I couldn't type... Hahaha! And I couldn't stop laughing! Oh, this is why I love the Raptor Brothers, especially Lugey! Oh, Lugey, Lugey, Lugey! Hahahaha!

An awesome, funny chapter!

Sorry? It totally worked! Diskworld here? Niiice! :)

Uh-oh, revelation time is nearing, hmm? Ha, the hennies are back! Haha!

Awesome chapter!

Not much going on? They're almost there! And that's nothing? Oh my gosh, if you only knew, Stork... and Piper, you too... Ah, I just love this chappie! Sweet, cute! Too bad the others don't feel that way about Junko's cooking, though... poor Junko! No worries, bud, maybe all you need is some practice? Hmm, yeah. Except you'd need willing, and I mean really willing, taste-testers. :)

Such an awesome fic! I'm really enjoying this...

impressive, if I didn't know better i'd think this was an episode that didn't make it into production. very well done.

That was one of the best StorkXPiper fanfics I've ever read. I loved it! ) I really wish they could make this into an episode!

this is an awesome story and i surprizingly luved the pairing XD

Are you gonna make a sequel? SQUEALS! Please?

Really good so far. You are keeping the characters in character. I really like that.

Throws up confetti! Yay! Got to love it! I loved the ending and your inclusion of the Raptors! I'm glad you finally finished and were able to get to this awesome ending. Stork and Piper unite with the 'real' them, fluffy blizarrian raptors, and Finn being grossed out by fluffiness!

Happy ending!

You finished! Awsome story! The ending was sooooo cute! I loved it! Keep me updated if you do anything new! Au revoir!

-le Foxx

Hey,

Just wanted to say you're writing style is very good. I'm a AerrowxPiper fan so I'm not sure if I like the plot. Nevertheless, you're still a pretty good writer.

Keep up the good work! :)

Best wishes,

Strawberry Kaydee

P.S. please read and review my story if you have time :)

I never would have guessed Luegey liked soft things. That was really cute how you protrayed him, though. X3

Aside from the grammatical errors (for example, "They parted and let out and let out a chucke at Finn's discomfort."), this was a pretty good story. I could see this becoming an episode, actually (though they would prabaly take out all the non-platonic StorkxPiper first).

Great job. Hope you do as well with your future stories. :)