Reviews for Melody of Mirage |
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Cacau1005 chapter 3 . 9/15/2013 I was wondering if you're going to continue this fic. I hope so, because I'm really curious and up to this point I think it's a good fic. Besides, the more YGO/HP x-overs that exist, the better. It's just that you haven't updated since 3 years ago, so... Could you reply me please? obs: I think the green eye means that Harry is perhaps associated with Yuugi (Yuugi is Harry in disguise, perhaps?). |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/11/2013 Your sstoriess are alwayss interesting. |
Guest chapter 3 . 4/28/2013 So do you have an idea for when the chapter comes out? |
Quetzalcoatls chapter 3 . 11/5/2012 nice! update soon! |
deathlover25 chapter 3 . 7/18/2012 I have a feeling... Is Yuugi... Harry? |
JackFrost14 chapter 3 . 11/8/2011 love it, :) |
Kanda Yuuki chapter 3 . 7/6/2011 This is very fascinating. Why did Yami call Kaiba priest? Does he remember? Will you be continuing this story? |
Shamise chapter 3 . 5/25/2011 Oh wow. I'm rather excited for the next chapter of this. :) Keep up the good work! |
Sympathetic-Moron chapter 3 . 4/8/2011 I like it probabley because I'm a huge fan of the first series of Yugioh (Also known as season 0 or Yugioh Shadow Games) so I love finding stories with it in them. I hope you continue writting this story and I greatly look forward to reading more. |
Golden feathers Edward chapter 3 . 11/28/2010 LOVE IT SO FAR! |
Sparklillian chapter 3 . 10/13/2010 Absolutely love it, keep going, please. with a cherry on top? The way u write is awesome, and I don't understand how u could not have more reviews? |
throwaway12345678 chapter 3 . 8/31/2010 Hm... Well, as viewer of the 4kids dub of the anime with my only knowledge of season 0 or the manga from paraphrasing in fanfiction, I have sound the first few chapters is, to me, a successful explaination of the events to an ignorant reader, it was still rather confusing. In particular, I found it was difficult to separate canon events from your changes - something I feel could possibly have been improved if you had made your changed more dramatic. However, I acknowledge that this is more myself at fault than you... Although I still feel the story would be richer for readers like myself if it was changed slightly. Also, as a monoligual reader, your seemingly extensive (to me at least)use of japanese creates a break in the story where I am forced to scroll down to the translations or leaves me ignorant of a potentially fundamental plot point - and though I have faith that you won't hide such things behind japanese translations, it still leaves me with an irritating doubt. In short, I would have prefered the changes from canon be more dramatic and the use of japanese continues to confuse me. X Eleanor. Postscript: Loved the story, hope the criticism was constructive. I also hope that I will be seeing Harry appearing in the story. Post Postscript: Is there any relation between the green of Harry's eyes and the appearance of green eyes in your story so far? |
randomidiotperson chapter 3 . 8/14/2010 This fiction is confusing yet it awsome! Update soon please! |
Seriyuu chapter 3 . 8/14/2010 my, my. yuugi sure sounded a lot more accusing when he was talking to shadi. he seems to have more backbone in the fanfic. anyway, when will he be able to meet yami/atemu again? and what's his connection to egypt and who are his and his jii-chan? moreover, how does sugoroku know so much? everything's so confusing... well, i guess that's part of what makes your story so intriguing, but i do hope more answers will come up soon. please update again sometime soon! i'm really looking forward to reading of your fic. |
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 3 . 8/14/2010 I like it! ** |