Aw! That's so CUTE!

I can imagine Young!Natalia making that hint and Asch/Luke going all '?'. The only thing more adorable is the adult Asch leaving the locket and hiding.

Its very...emcapsulating of their in-game romance.

Very sweet fic. That's the thing about Asch, no matter how much he wants to show an emotion (other than anger), he'll try his hardest not to. Especially with Natalia - I think you really captured that at the end, where he hangs around to see if she gets the locket but doesn't dare show that he's there.

A couple crits, I hope you don't mind:

"gold shape locket" should be something like "gold heart-shaped locket" - and in the next paragraph, "heart shaped locket" should be "heart-shaped locket"

Natalia then narrowed her eyes and stated[,] "But a locket..."

Overall, good work, I liked it.

Aaw, this is adorable! - This is one of my favorite couples too, and I think you hit their personalities perfectly. Thank you, Earth Star! D