I loved it! A great short that recreated the world vividly. Great background research and really nice ark. It reminds me of the holiday shorts Disney produces for their shows. Keep writing!

jake you cuold give her a valentine's day card make one

LOVED! So cute... *-*

LOVE IT! are you done with my book yet? :) JK. LOL. See you at school 3

awwhh.. i loved this. oh, jake.. only he would somehow get into poison plants. lmao.

you wrote it so wonderfully. ]

I really don't have much to say, other than that it was possibly the best Valentine's story I've read. Thank you for the fluff. 3

NYA! SO PSYCHED FOR YOUR FIRST STORY! Okay, reading now.

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Okay, done, and I have one thing in particular to say...I have never read an Avatar fanfic before, but you've already set the standards high. That. Was. Incredible. Everyone was so in-character and believable. I LOVED IT! And the ending just made me go, "AWW!"

Extraordinary first fanfic, Nya. Adding this to my favorites for sure!

Looking forward to seeing more from you! SO STOP READING THIS AND GO WRITE SOME MORE!

As your first fic it was very good! Very cute of Jake to really try and show Neytiri his love... but in the end he allways kinda screws up in one way or another haha :)!

Would like to see more in the future OFCOURSE!

Aw, that was cute, but Jake's gotta learn what plants to stay away from.