Damn, damn and damn.
Just when it was about to get good.
Please update soon :D

luv it! pls continue

love it!

WHAT!? Why! I want the story line! this is like my favorite story

okay. can you let me know when you re write it thanks.

Why do u call this chappie boring? I like how it explains and sets up the story. And u have hotaru and the koko sumire pairing!:D

i hope you update the rewritten versions soon. i really miss this fanfic... ö i would really love to read more and find out what happens to mikan and natsume... ah, bu all in good time. cant rush good things.
i hope you continue this and dont forget to have fun! gambatte yo! \(•‿•)

I like your idea a LOT ! I think you have a good decision re-write it because it has no feeling in it . You have to put more feelings , more anger , more details , and most of all please change the apostrophe ' to this " so it'll be easier to read . I really like your idea thx for writing it , it's not perfect but i like you not giving up and re-write it . Can'т wait how it'll turn out , oh yeah please make the chapters longer :D . Xoxo

so nice! :D

love your story so much!

I like your story.

Please update !

I love your story

I WANT MOOOOORE.

You're awesome, stay that way so you don't need to revise, okay? (I want a new chapter) :D

Update first, after you finish writing everything, you can edit it out. I waaaant to know moooore.

You're making me sad, update soon! DO UPDATE, OKAY? :)

Don't follow me. I'm a lazy-ass, no good bum. :

I KNEW IT! GOD, I WAS RIGHT. LOLOLOL.

Why does she want to kill Mikan, her own daughter, how could she? As each chapter keeps on being updated, new questions keep on arising. I want answers. :(

Ack. That Natsume. Why can't he just make up his mind? ;-;

Update soon please. For me? For the readers?