Damn. Reading Artemis in Apollo's personality made me cringe the whole time.

OMG, LOL! Ahahahahahahahahahaha, ur chapters are so unbelievably funny! Lolololololol! Please update soon!

Whats wrong with Artemis?

My, my, my how insufferably obnoxious, arrogant and jealous Apollo is! But he's fun, I have to accept that. Cool; no wait, warm story (It is certainly not hot).

Some of my favourite lines:

Hot Awesome Nice Dazzling Sexy Oracle Magnificent Elegant HANDSOME APOLLO! (My mom, a math professor, went berserks when she saw this one)

I shrugged. I don't want to stay on Earth another day. No, do not get me wrong, mortals. It is not that I don't want to stay here; this place just does not suit me because I'm too awesome. (Oh how diplomatic)

What is this? Me? Feeling guilty?

Apollo read the pjo books?Other than that awesome story!

gosh apollo! your not going to die! just fade away...

i luv this chapter! i kept laughing in the pimple part! :)

oh, CRAP! I'm watching a comedy, AND I'm reading this. Gods, when would I stop laughing?

Haha! Artemis is my fave Olympian...it'd be scary if she became her younger brother...

XD *falls over laughing* thats funny. Hehe

HAHA! I Love this story!

umm... hahaha LOL! so FUCKING FUNNY!

XD *Falls over laughing*

That Junebug1998 chick reads fanfiction on her iPod touch? Cool! I do to! Umm... Hmm...why am I telling you this... Oh, well, forget about that. Uhhh, it's okay, the story, I mean, but I thought Apollo was the god of humility and righteousness or something, so I tend not to think that he's THAT concieted.

won't let me sign in! Lol...well, this was fun to read. One of the only PJ fics I'll read. It's even harder on my iPod but it's the best!

HAHAHAHA! Oooh god I love Apollo

especially the dad part :D