You... are such an excellent writer, Artemis. 3 I think you're one of my favorites on .

THIS. WAS. SO. FRIGGIN'. EPIC!

ahem...

Just the way you've put it, the subtle (or maybe not so subtle, who knows;) connection and the way they're the same, yet not, it just makes it so beautiful... And the end with 'his Namine', it was so powerful...

I'm a sucker for sad stuff... especially Namiku sad stuff

There were a few phrases that got me squealing for a few minutes before being able to continue on :D

I soo loved it 3

Oh! This is good, I like it!

It's nice how you get into the emotions Riku and Namine had during the time they were in the mansion, not many people do that.

Good job!

-Larka

Artemis Fowl II.

I love Artemis Fowl. Just thought I'd throw that in there. Holly and he are awesome.

Anyway, it's a great story! Fantastically written, decently in character, touching and beautiful. Very nice. _ It's awesome.