This was great! You wrote everyones personalities perfectly, and the storyline was cute - a little bit slice of life with the added adventure and drama. I'm glad the nightmares didn't lead to a really overly horrifying ending or twist and I LOVED when Riku and Sora were fighting and calling out their battle cries. Totally cracked me up XD Thanks for writing!

This fic deserves so many more reviews, it was wonderful ; v;

Btw I like the fighting and limit references you put in there.

I am completely in love with this story. The song lyrics at the end fit perfectly. This is definitely one of my all time favorite stories.

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Useful for those who've never played Chain of Memories, but a little tedious for those of us who have. You kept it interesting by having Sora pop in every once in a while, but a couple of pieces seemed like a kind've forced dialogue. _

Still, I'm interested, and I want to keep reading. Excellent use of sadness there, when Sora thought about seeing "Riku" "die" in front of him. _

-Kayura

OMG, yay. _ I think I have finally found a noteworthy KH fic. Ah, what patience can do.

So far, I'm very impressed. The only thing that threw me off was Sora's face being stained with "dry" tears. Did you mean silent? I think so, but I can't be sure. Other than that, beautiful work.

Next chapter!

-Kayura

i loved this story from beginning to end. good job

i loved the ending so cute~ :3

Hm, very interesting! I like it. Poor Repliku though... Getting locked behind the door! I was so waiting for him to say "Take care of her." But I'm a dork like that. So oh well. I really liked it. And the ending was so sweet! Very nicely done.

TTnTT the ending was awesome!

First of all, I'd like to congratulate you on finishing your first multipchaper fic! It had me (along with many other readers, I'm sure) hooked from the very beginning, all the way up to the adorable and satisfying conclusion. So, kudos to you, my friend!

I seemed to have formed a strange affection towards Repliku after reading this. He seems naive, sometimes innocent, and his experiences with the trio were fun to read, especially when he learns how to swim. X'3 I like how he wasn't completely crazy over Namine, it's kinda like he finally realized he can't have her. He just appreciates the time he has to spend with her, and doesn't overdo it. I liked that quality about him, how he finally learned to accept reality after being tricked for so long.

I LOL'd how you made the meat that Namine bit as Repliku's lucky charm, instead of the paopu fruit! I didn't freaking know you read the KH manga, you sly pimp! XDD Repliku is such a creepy stalker. But that's what makes him so great. He and Axel could combine their stalker powers and follow Kairi and Sora for the rest of their lives, plotting ways to smexify their unsuspecting Nobodies.

... Ahem. Anyways.

The slight hints at a love triangle between Riku, Sora, and Repliku kept everything fresh and constanly entertaining. Sora always had trouble sorting out his feelings between the real Riku and the fake one, and Riku was always getting jealous and annoyed... It served to add a deeper level to Sora and Riku's romantic relationship. I loved all those small things that brought them together, like Sora's bad dreams and Namine revealing that Kairi likes Sora, which spurs Riku into action. Can you say fangasm? B

OH MY GOD. RIKU MAKING FUN OF HIS KH1 OUTFIT. DD I should have expected something like that, especally how we had an entire conversation on MSN about it. BUT THEN I SAW IT IN THE STORY AND WAS LIKE "BAHAHAHA!" C8

Oh my god! Uber epic battle scene plz? XDD This part was so vivid and descriptive, I could practically picture everything in my head like it was a movie. You even used their original battle sayings, too! The only reason I know this is because whenever I was playing the game and Sora said "This is it!", I would start laughing and think of that Michael Jackson movie. But we're getting off the topic here. I also thought it was also pretty awesome how Namine got to fight, too, instead of being the pitiful little princess who needs to be saved. But you kept it realistic, making sure the reader knew that she was less experienced than the rest of the boys. X3

But... Repliku! Why! ;~; Even though he only complicated things, it was still sad that he sacrificed himself. D8 Part of me was hoping they'd figure out a way to keep him there forever. Oh, well. It was a tragic, emotional part, and the emotion was captured well. I like how it was sort of a secret that Repliku and Namine kissed. ;D Ooh la la~

The ending was very fulfilling and tied up all the loose ends. It doesn't leave people hanging like "omg wtf? that's the end? phuck this", but it was heartwarming and brought closure to Repliku, and of course, Sora and Riku's relationship. The lyrics were a nice way to end it- Normally I cringe when people try to incorporate Simple and Clean or My Sanctuary into a fic, but this fit very nicely. The emotion and words matched the situation exactly.

If this review was any longer, everyone would die of heart failure (40 character, whut?). So I'll stop now. XD GOOD WORK, AND I CAN'T WAIT TO SE WHAT YOU BLESS THE FANFICTION UNIVERSE WITH NEXT. C:

Very nicely done! I especially liked the way you had everything come full circle, as it were, in the end. Lovely job!

PERFECT! Oh, I'm supposed to be reviewing...

I think I had a Nerdgasm when I read that little part where Sora and Riku use a limit, really, it was like BOOM! Love it!

Suddenly I'm feeling the vibe between Kairi/Namine and Repliku, hope there's a happy ending for them somewhere in the future. It would be awesome to have Repliku come back...

Now, th entire story overall was great, the beginning to the end was just scene after scene of pure coolness, I love the entire thing so much! I mean now if only the rest of the world would read this and discover it's pure awesomeness...

Now that I'm done with that it's time for my favoraite part. Oh my goodness that was so freaking cute! I mean Sora and Riku are just meant for each other! And then there was the little Simple and Clean chorus-thing at the end and it made the entire scene cute to the power 10 superscripted 5! Yeah, I think I've said everything there is to say here (As if that's even possible)

omg that was AMAZING it would be nice for like an epiloge like later on in the future. but with or without that this story is amazing! i loved it

*~ashley~*

The good news is that I'm almost finished playing this game. The bad news is you've left me with a cliffhanger :o Please, I NEED to know who's coming!

Yey! Cliffhanger! Now I must be emo; Why must you hate us so much to leave us with such a cliffhanger! I need more! Please, what the heck is happening here? Maybe a small tippy thing? Please, throw us a bone somewhere! Yeah, emoing done. I actually like Repliku right now, and I'm interested in where the last chapter takes us. And obviously, I can't wait for more.