Well done-I especially liked the attidue about the trinket vs the human life. And loved the line about ever the gentlemen.

Come on, you can go faster than that.

- LOVE that line ]

It’s a mistake on her part that lets me grab her by the waist and I roll over so that my body cushions her fall.

Ever the gentleman - some habits die hard.

- love the bit of dark humour ]

Wow!

...I think I need a cold shower.

I love that he still had his gentlemanly habits even though he's about to kill her. I like it.

Nice Nice Nice.

xx

Bleak, and vivid, and really rather brilliant.

So much great imagery here, but I especially loved; 'Fragile, familiar - when the blood starts flowing they‘re all the same, all silky skin upon steel and eyes over bright in the darkness.'

For all that wonderful alliteration.