so deep so so deep you make me cry. I'll sue you

That was pretty sad. This is my reasoning for my Naruto fell out of love.
Sasuke returned his feelings, yet he broke his heart and made him cry. And in the end, Naruto was like: I can't fall in love with a heartless man, who played with his and Sakura's feelings.

Aww sequel? This so needs one..it was so good...~Samsal

I know it's a one-shot but...more _

i really love this. the bitter-sweet story.

beautiful and sad...

I thought this was a beautiful story, and if this is your crappy writing I can't wait to go read your good writing. _

Naruto's emotions were practically exuding itself out of my computer screen. I'm all depressed now! :( One-sided stories usually always make me so sad, but I love the wonderfully done ones...which yours is.

I admit I got confused at the end...did Naruto fall out of love with him or was he just trying to convince himself? I have no idea! (I'm going to imagine he was trying to convince himself since that makes me feel slightly better.)

So...did Sasuke kiss him? Yes, no? I read the last four lines over about six times so I wouldn't feel stupid if I said I was confused over something that was blatantly obvious...

Anyway, great story! You had a few typos in there, but your grammar and wording was excellent. Great job! :D

But if Sasuke does have some feelings for Naruto, a sequel would be magnificent...not that I'm hinting or implying or nudging you violently in the shoulder or anything!

why not required? its wonderfully done. though sasuke's own POV would be nice. I pity Naruto, but atleast he managed to moved on. I'm not mad at Sasuke, he's just confusing is all. Hmmm...

*sigh* So sad, but very well-written indeed :)

It's been a while since I had the urge to actually sign in for a review.

This is one of those few stories, that after reading it I think to myself 'This would make an amazing multi-chaptered' story. It's just a suggestion, but this would make a REALLY amazing story if you kept going on with this.

-Rebeka

Ah, this is so sad. I cried. -sniff- I wish you would make a sequel but you probably won't just because I'm some fan (sticks out tongue).

Good job and can't wait for more of your work!

-Faith

That was really sad and confusing... Why didn't he love Sasuke anymore? And if Sasuke returned his feelings then why didn't he break it off with Sakura? I'm really confused... xD

Then I want moar of your crap :D (Not this but other crap.. now GIMMEE. -sounds so sick XD-)

This is really fucking sad.

But those things happen often enough, right...:/

So emo, I love it. LOVE IT. Haha.

Somehow, I can relate. Hmm. Nevermind. :D

I love your stories, they're amazing.