wonderful I watch the movie last night and fell in love with this couple

Very nice. I thought it matched her pov quite well. )

Is there any chance you take requests? I was wondering if you would consider doing a pov for the scene where Edward tricks the corporate guy to bite him...

*sigh* if only the story did go that way ;)

lovely

Brilliant! As usual. I love the way you describe things. Looking forward to more! :)

Lovely, just as the first story. It's simple, but fits the characters so well. I have one minor note, though. Edward (and, in reality, Ethan Hawke) has blue eyes, not brown. I'm beyond positive about this and you can tell somewhat from this picture:



Again, lovely story. :)