not bad, very different, quite refreshing

I almost quit this early, because it is way outside my Potterporn tolerance levels. However, I found the rest of the story pretty good, so I started skipping past "Harmony Rivers" inspired content and mostly enjoyed the rest.

Reparo snow globe? This story occasionally has an unusual lack of simple magic. Hermione could repair Harry's glasses the first time they met on the train. The Head Auror should be able to fix a dropped snow globe.

This is a really sweet and sexy story. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Fantastic

What a fantastic, lemony tour de force!

A love story for the ages.

Thank you so much!

TGM

I like it a lot very good story, i have only some minor things.
-You just skip over harry surprising hermione with the manor when it's finished.
-Weird hermione never told harry about the books she wrote.
Furthermore i just assume this is some alternate universe/dimension or this is not very occ story. Of course i don't know really how hermione would be after school but considering most fanfics and canon it's easy.
-I don't see hermione the kind girl that would have sex right way in her first relationship and certainly not one that only lasted 2/3 months with ron that was even going downhill, or for that matter other people but certainly not with ron.
-If read one where she a strip dancer so just like she would be with some gigolo i find it hard to believe. Although true to her nature she wants to learn (but still that and ron is such a shame) anyway she tells her story and doesn't want to know harry's?
So weird read such things and harry's oke with it, should there be conflicting emotions or other stuff pop up.

Wonderful story, thanks for sharing!

Oof, the whole situation with Trace seemed rather forced and and unnecessary. Also, Harry is being an idiot..why would Hermione ever be out of his league?

Good great

Great

Good

I hope we get to hear about her holiday her dad suggested for ext years present to Marrakesh. Hopefully she can take Harry with her.

First of all, no chance she didn't have the cell phone in mint condition with one flick of her wand. No big thing. I love the things you have to say and you say them well BUT you take so long and work so hard at dragging the dead horse to the next chapter so you can beat it some is something I hate in every form...movies, TV, books, etc...convenient stupidity vastly inappropriate for the characters involved. It isn't going to add suspense. It is too cliche and besides, it isn't that kind of story. It sucks the life out of romance stories. But, as I said, there is enough here to have faith and so I will take a break and read some more later. Thank you. PS, I was surprised that neither of them was suspicious and pursued the possibility that Trace had been abducted.

Loved the story up till this chapter. This chapter spoiler it. The story flows so well, then you have up and write summaries instead jump from here to there you didn’t even bother to write her finding out about the manner. Until this chapter it was one of my favourite harry and Hermione stories, it’s a same you gave up on it.