"Hell the guy used to change his diaper" Dean was one hell of an awesome big brother. I love Dean so much. Even the story is good. I like how Sam's not shy about being naked in front of his brother.

Awesome story. Loved all of the hurt Sam. You did such an amazing job detailing everything I could feel all of his pain! Thanks so much.

Lovely! :)

Wonderful story. Thank You.

poor Sammy, Dean worries about him so much but at least he's got an older sibling who cares.

Poor Sammy *hugging him, being careful to not cayse him any more pain* it's okay Sam, they'll figure out what's wrong and help.

what a great story, love protective dean, just warms my heart. i love sam, he's even hotter when he's suffering ( don't judge me too harshly) Lol you had the brothers in character perfectly. thanks for a great story #_#

Another good one!

one word fantastic or as i love to say Samazing.

hey there really like the story so far oh and poor sam

it was as delightful as the first chapter, great brotherly love! Great job!

I really enjoyed the first chapter. It's so well writen and exciting. Absolutely loved every moment of it :)

Great story! :)

Hey Hon

congrats on your first SPN story and wow what a first! It was great, had everything AND most importantly a hurting Sammy! hehehehe

well done, I'm looking forward to more of your SPN stories..

hugs Shelley

ps just one little thing, it helps to put a time break between shifts in time, anything like a few *** or SPN or S/D anything that breaks it so the reader knows that there is a change in time. It got a little confusing when Sam was in the shower and then it was two weeks later I think. Just a small break between the two would have been a bit easier when reading other than that hon, it's great!

I just really felt Sam's pain throughout this. Ugh. Very descriptive.