Oh so sweet thanks for the very good read

Cuteee :)

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this was absolutely breathtaking, especially the second time around. I love the image of Lisbon so carefree, wading in the water and getting Jane to join in. The image is lovely and you did a great job incorporating the storyline and using the song :) Great Rachel!

Yana

I really missed your stories. This was amazing. your muse really have to get back from her vacation. This was a really sweet story and I loved it! Great work!

I liked the simplicity of this story, if that makes sense. A care-free Lisbon is something I wish we'd see more often, you seem to capture her perfectly here.

What a lovely fic! Haven't seen the ep but I totally loved how Lisbon was there for Jane. Plus it's so sweet how she allows herself to be a little more open when he's around and the last line was fab! Really enjoyed it x

I liked the concept, but you switched verb tenses so many times that it really began to bother me. Just something to watch out for next time. Other than that, though, it was good and I enjoyed it.

Yeah, they're both better near to each other. Cute, and write more soon!

Sweet story. Nice to see Lisbon relaxed once in a while:)

aw, i love it :0)

sweet

It's absolutely amazing! :D I really do enjoy reading the fluffiness!

Sometime a nice one-shot short is a good way to start the day!

Yep. This was one of those times.

Dear Robin, I love your turn at fanfic writing, even if you didn't know about it because Rach cheekily nicked your phrase...

These are two sweet episode tags that work strangely well together. And I'm so glad incessant prodding works because otherwise I'd get very bored indeed. Heh.

(And thank you btw.)