Reviews for Kisses Reveal All
Guest chapter 1 . 12/2/2016
Not bad nice
doc boy chapter 1 . 11/29/2016
That was cute. I liked it
Guest chapter 1 . 3/8/2016
What the hell is a fucking ditto doing?!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/17/2014
ash x dawn forevermore
Douglas X. Pierce chapter 1 . 2/8/2014
Ash and May forever, fuck Misty
Guest chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
how sweet
Ben Christner chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
They should have put this in the show.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
Cheezy Cheezy comment.
Mr. Nine chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
you are Awsome this story is going straight to my favorites
xwittychickx chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
lol I didn't think that was cheesy at all, and personally I HATE cheesy/fluffy stories ;) This had great humor, and it had the right amount of cuteness where it wasn't overwhelming, but it was still really nice to read. I hope you continue to make great stories like this one!
ValisFan chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
I liked this story, it was cute, and kissing feels sooooo good. But I think you made Ash a bit too aggressive, he's probably even shyer than May in the anime.
LOL chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
Okay nice one, but you should make it more fluffy
Rickydabest chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
That's really different to other advanceshipping stories and i liked it, no I loved that. Something about it was just really good. Nice job.
xzavx chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
it was great!
zeaeevee chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
Ash was really OOC in this oneshot but it was really sweet, yes a bit cheesy, but sweet :3

nicely written.
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