Reviews for Kisses Reveal All |
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Guest chapter 1 . 12/2/2016 Not bad nice |
doc boy chapter 1 . 11/29/2016 That was cute. I liked it |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/8/2016 What the hell is a fucking ditto doing?! |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/17/2014 ash x dawn forevermore |
Douglas X. Pierce chapter 1 . 2/8/2014 Ash and May forever, fuck Misty |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/22/2013 how sweet |
Ben Christner chapter 1 . 1/19/2013 They should have put this in the show. |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/1/2012 Cheezy Cheezy comment. |
Mr. Nine chapter 1 . 6/2/2012 you are Awsome this story is going straight to my favorites |
xwittychickx chapter 1 . 12/5/2010 lol I didn't think that was cheesy at all, and personally I HATE cheesy/fluffy stories ;) This had great humor, and it had the right amount of cuteness where it wasn't overwhelming, but it was still really nice to read. I hope you continue to make great stories like this one! |
ValisFan chapter 1 . 6/5/2010 I liked this story, it was cute, and kissing feels sooooo good. But I think you made Ash a bit too aggressive, he's probably even shyer than May in the anime. |
LOL chapter 1 . 5/29/2010 Okay nice one, but you should make it more fluffy |
Rickydabest chapter 1 . 3/22/2010 That's really different to other advanceshipping stories and i liked it, no I loved that. Something about it was just really good. Nice job. |
xzavx chapter 1 . 2/26/2010 it was great! |
zeaeevee chapter 1 . 2/23/2010 Ash was really OOC in this oneshot but it was really sweet, yes a bit cheesy, but sweet :3 nicely written. |