Nice

shit...

It's a good history... but you mess up everything!

Rosalie would fit better as a daughter of Aphrodite but...eh. oh well.

do they know its bella. why dont they confront her and bella is the daughter of poseidon right

3 Yessss! B/J pairing! Even though im team edward (also jasper) it gets a tad boring after a while to have a b/e

why? WHY? are you making Thalia evil (okay, exagerating but still)

I rlly liked the story at first but towards the end it just seemed like you didnt no wat to write so you just made everyone a demigod. /

good

heya! nice story [) about u writing i sequel i think it is a great idea, go for it!

You asked for some ideas of what u should write about. I suggest maybe a story about Bella and Jasper's love for each other and also a story about the love between Thalia and Jake!

Thanks for reading ;[)

ox LOLLY xo

all rite i was think that jasper and bella train alot on the other had hades wants to start another war AGAIN and this time to get rid of Olympus and zues sends out bella, jasper, emmett, alice, edward and roselie. during the fight jasper and edward got hit with a fight ball thing and bella has to chose between the two of then jasper or edward and will one of then die

ohh and i really like this stoyyyy and i cant wait for the next sequel

Great story, I loved it. Keep up the great work.

Dani

AWWW! That was cute and awesome...

YAY! It's not an Edward/Bella pairing.

why end it this was good