What a beautiful story! It was sweet, moving, and utterly adorable. Good job!
Happy Writing :)
Rapunzel3

Awe, this was a sweet fic. Though I feel bad for Kaoru. I wish that Haruhi loved him just as much as she loved Hikaru. But alas the world is not perfect. You did a great job with this though.

I loved the story :) Good write!

VERY NICE! I totally loved it. Yeah, this pairing is so dramatic oh god. Very good!

This was awesome! Are you going to make a sequel?

Aww such a nice story! I love it! _

Lovely ending! Very sweet, and they were both really cute :3

Awesome story! :D

mimi x

Thanks for the story, I found it bittersweet yet touching at the same time.

What a scardy cat.

He gets a kiss and runs away.

Nice chapter _

This is a really sweet story.

The kiss scene was suprising considering Haruhi initiated it but it was also cute.

great job (:

Adorable! Though I never thought that Haruhi would be the one to take action... Looking forward to more!

First chapter, and I'm already won over! HaruHika all the way! :)

And from an editor's view...

I didn't catch any major grammatical mistakes, same with the spelling. Good sentence structures in my opinion, but I'm not an expert. Not at all. Good job with the chapter!

love this story

This is really good! PLEASE continue.

Aw, cute chapter :3 There were both very in character and you showed Haruhi's fear well. Lol, that's just like Hika to know they have an aunt but not realise she doesn't live in 'the town over' until ages after XD They never did like their aunts did they? Sneaky Kaoru ;P

Can't wait for another chaoter! Why did you run Hikaru, go back and kiss Haru back. X3

~Mimi x