Liked this one. Good job.

With Tony's talent for getting into trouble, let's hope he won't allow Abby into getting him into more. Goid story

great story

This is a really great story

Just found your story - I enjoyed it a lot. You are a talented story writer - balancing the emotions of the characters without getting stuck in all of the emotions. Please keep writing and sharing.

Gibbs rolled his eyes at Tony's antics and breathed a sigh of relief. Peace had returned to his kingdom and all was b/c it "Gibbs World".

Loved Tony ready to i guess want to hit Gibbs. He was just looking out for Abby. In a way kinda sad that he didn't. know at first what Gibbs meant. You were just doing your job. He was being a big brother.

Good story, thanks.

It's never a good idea to go against Gibbs!

"All good things must come to an end, and so, mercifully, must all bad things."

This line was really what I needed tonight. :) I'm really nervous about a surgery I'm having tomorrow and that made me feel much, MUCH better. Thank you. :)

Abby got what she deserved, feel sorry for Tony though :) thanks

Great, great, great story. The 'adventure' part of it, and then all the characters and the dynamic and interactions between them, and everything, was really, really, really great, and I enjoyed it a lot. Also, I absolutely loved the thing about the cops- that was lovely. Anyway, thanks for the story!

Tony was right - they deserved that! I loved the big brother protectiveness at the end, and I liked that Abby wanted the same spanking Tony got (although I think she regretted that!) and how Gibbs responded to that. Poor Tony having to get himself home after that spanking!

Just read all four chapters and loved it. Like your other stories, this one was very well written. I really liked that Tony got mad that Gibbs used the strap on Abby, even though it was her that got him in trouble. He really is a great big brother.

loved it!

it was a good one thanks hope you write more stories