its nice to see alistair having some character development instead of being incompetent!warden

this part is more or less the same as it was in cannon, but i cant really picture many ways it could diverge

i like how you use a lot of small changes to make the world a bit more gloomy

methinks that sten will be leading the group before long

its cool to see alistair's side of the darkspawn chronicles: heres hoping it ends on a better note

man

i feel real sorry for morrigan and alistair nobody should blame him i mean this is all bullshit and there is not enought time to réflex about other people deeperfeelings so he wont be mister wise about people...a shame anyhow.

badass

Where they the other origins there at the end?

Liking this twist on events. It's like watching Alistair's adventure that's ending is seen with the Darkspawn Chronicles DLC.

Liked the way you summed up the other origins.

This was very well written. An imaginative retelling of the story. Thanks.

What a wonderful story. I really enioyed reading it, even if it was depressing at times XD thanks somuch for the effort, it was well appreciated.

Excellently done and very enjoyable to read. Bravo.

This, sir, is genius.