Perfect, u captured their personalities spot on!

They're so cuute! I love the way you portrayed them both. Beautiful. :)

Great! I love Pandora Hearts 3, haha... Well, keep the good work up! I look forward to any following stories

it's so cute :3

nicee

So cute! Very good character introspection.

Aww that was such a cute ending :D I liked it a lot~

Yay your first Pandora Hearts story! :D

It's so good! I like how you added the Apple Blossom reference at the end, to make the roundabout ending. Also, you made them very in-character and in such a way that they could be canon. .

I can't wait for you to write more! I enjoyed Beta-ing for you. :3

~B

Aww :3 Alice...she really is just something different xD

I really liked how you portrayed them here. It really made me understand how their emotions are, whether it be toward eachother or just in general.

All in all, very good job! - I enjoyed it.

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