Yeah, definitely needs some explaining but I shall wait for you to get around to it.

So the three managed to... somewhat redeem themselves.

Their motives were admirable, their methods were not.

This story has so many different angles it makes my head spin.

Good work.

Gil Graham was a unique case in that he took his disgrace stoically. These other heads, infuriatingly, refuse to accept their actions in such an admirable (if still regrettable) manner, and attempt to escape their fates by destroying their subordinates...

I just...

I don't know what I want to say here. I feel a mix of frustration for the protagonists and impotent rage towards those covering everything up.

This story is really good, the situation is being written out incredibly. Heh, I'm rambling...

Keep up the good work.

I have no idea what's going on, but I really really feel the need to stab someone right now.

oh wow, what another twist! this is a very elaborate story! great work so far. it isn't that short of a chapter. full of creative ideals/plots. i'm very impressed! keep up the great work!

UPDATE SOON! hehehehe... have fun[sorta] on ur business trip... surprised that Reinforce is still here... really twisted story...

wow!XDso cool..so those three old people 'save' ahaha..I really thought that they are going to kill one of the protagonists LOL...you might receive flames if that happen(but still,those things are still good as long as the story is good...umm...am i making any sense here?ahaha...) good chapter..It ended in a cliffhanger i wonder who that fifth person is?Take care on your trip all right?_ continue it when you get back.

I find it rather interesting that we started off with issues regarding Nanoha, but now suddenly something Hayate-related has leapt to the forefront. It's certainly not a bad thing, as it was unexpected and thus made a good twist.

I wonder who the 5th person could be. I shall wait patiently for your return to find out.

It's heating up :)

Now I'm curious if our trio of Aces can use the same tactic as admirals do to beat them up, meaning they would have to trust each other fully and I wonder if Nanoha can do that yet with Hayate.

Also I wonder what Yuuno discovered, maybe admirals can control Nanoha somehow even without visual stimulation...

Can't wait for next chapter of this interesting story!

moree please

yuuno's so cool here and that's true..XDi want more action(depends on youXD)..please update soon_

Geh, I thought I had left a review last night...

Anyways, chapter was a bit dull at first, but that's to be expected since it was mostly just info dump. Things really picked up at the end though and was rather intense. I can't wait to find out how the fight goes and what Yuuno discovered.

Sorry it took so long to beta this chapter. I'm sure I'll dive right into the next one! :)

das gefangnis der magie is one of Vita's spells if i remember correctly. XD yes, the admirals do act strange in this part... weird... I'm glad Nanoha can now control herself. i wanna see a great battle! will the wolkenritter be included? i wanna see Signum in action! XD

moree

don't kill Hayate!