This is great story. I love your Shepard as well as your writing style. Last chapter with Joker POV was excellent. Just update more frequently, I can't wait for the next chapter :-)

That's really cool. What started like something fun and light became that tragic and sweet. Thank you.

They're so cute together! Keep it up:)

Просто ради интереса, у тебя была английская или русская версия?

Interesting shift for this chapter. Looking forward to the next. :)

All i can say is... XD

For my part, I would prefer to see interlude communications, particularly if they are as interesting as this...

This story is really amusing. I love your Shepard. She definitely fits with Joker.

I think Joker flashbacks is the way to go. I'm a sucker for backstory. :)

This is an interesting and rather humorous story. Keep it up.

Also, has a beta reader option that should allow you to contact someone to help you; however, while I would still recommend getting one, I will also say that your story was quite understandable on its own. Good job.

I like it)

Love how many little details you used - "witch", war-ship game, etc. Your Shepard is believable and snarky - I can see why Joker likes her:)

And, of course, humor is great!

And I'm curious about what she's gonna do with Kaidan's letter?)

love the story :) good sense of humour

good, good. a little too short but loved it all the same.

you did a great job with this story. your spelling is as good or better than most English as first language people. :)

personally i would like to see more a bit more description as oppose to just talking.

This story is pretty funny. I like it. :) Keep up the good work.

And... you're English isn't that bad. I really didn't think anything of it until I saw your author's note about it.

so very much awesome!

light and casual, didn't even sit once while reading.

keep it on!