One of my favorite toko story. This is a really good one shot ️

I absolutely adored this, you’re an amazing writer and I’m only sad that this is the only toko story you’ve done. It’s a great fic, with the right amount of angst and pain, like you say fixing 100 years of war can’t be that easy; I think you portrayed them quite well into their future personas without losing their characters. What else can I say? I loved this and it’s going to my favorites

Love it. Gonna love ToKo forever. Would you consider to continue a sequel of this fic and is there any posiblity of them for marriage, raising children, ruling nation together?
Two wrongs can make it right.. :)
And thanks for the hard work.

I love ToKo

so i do have a fanficn account but i am ti lazy to log in ... anyway LOVENTHE FANFIC TO DEATH

I enjoyed reading this piece. It's a beautiful story. The characters were well written and the plot is very interesting. Thank you!

I hope you'll write a sequel of sorts... or another avatar fic?

take care :)

This might have been rendered incompatible with canon by TLoK, but having read it I find that it's now nevertheless one of favorite post hundred-year war fics ever.

Great work, and I really like what you did with the characters. Neither Zuko nor Toph is quite their self from canon, but both are people I can easily see them becoming over five years past the end of Avatar. It's a pity that there isn't more of this. Should you ever feel the urge to write a sequel, please don't try to suppress it. :)

I loved this, it was a very realistic take on the after-war world...thank you for sharing!

I just finished the podfic, and you get hearts. I'd type them, mind, but the site gets rid of less than symbols, so you'd get a bunch of threes.

I had never read a fic or one-shot about avatar before. And I can say I loved it. I love Toph, she does not mince words. I always thought she with Zuko is cute. I loved the one.

Completely amazing. It was sexy, funny, and a bit romantic in the sense that they both found each other at such low points in their lives. I loved it completely and the fact that Toph makes those awesome jokes XD .. priceless.

Impressive story and a lot of fun. I can totally see Zuko having trouble ruling his people and needing to blow off steam. The detail about it was impressive too, its nice to see someone go to effort to show how Zuko might rule. I think ironically hell have to take some lessons from his father on that though. I.e. "I am Firelord and you will obey me and love everyone and enjoy peace and freedom and tolerance. And if you dont i will stamp on your face and burn down your house."

Anyways, thanks a lot. i may have a pokesy around your archive, see if youve done anything else im interested in reading. its rare to meet an author who thinks detail is actually important on this site. And rarer still to meet an author who is good because theyre genuinly talented at writing, as opposed to just better than most of the other fanfic authors (which isnt much of a competition to win).

HAHAHA amazing!

This is awesome! I loved the way your Toph turned out and her interactions with Zuko! Written like this they are amazing :D Please write moooore Toko!

this is the best zuko and toph story i read so far