make it a little drama-y

I couldn't care less if this was your first fanfic! I'll loved it! Funny, fluffy and awesome! So ya awesome story!

awwwwww this was really really cute. i was literally crooning as i read this, it was that adorable. lol great job! one question why did he call Kendall teddy? it was kinda confusing but an adorable name.

Just saying before I start reading this so I can go on without it in my head, yaoi is a honmosexual relationship in anime or manga, the word you're looking for is slash. K. Now onto my reading.

AW! THAT WAS SO KAWAI! ja ne!~

aw this was adorable

i loved it

it was cute, cheesy and adorable!

three of the best things int he world

Hey, the OOC thing happens, but the more you write them the more IC they'll be. That being said you should deffinately write more! It was a little OOC in places, but over all the writing was good and I liked it!