Honestly, this piece gave me the chills. Especially loved that little bit where you talked about Orochimaru/Sand/Pain followed by Iwa/Rain/Mist/Cloud and continued it with the latter followed by the former!

They are more unified than the other villages.

Poetic, beautiful and quite emotional. Thank you for this tribute; it catches the spirit of the Will of Fire quite accurately, and that is very difficult to do. Amazing.

I like the thought of someone's will continuing in the dark. Nice one-shot, thanks for sharing

Just came across this awesome fic. Brought tears of pride to my eyes. Thank you for sharing!

I like to think something similar happened in Uzugakure, and no one talks about them that much because of how frightening it was for those involved.

This gives me chills. Good job.

Well, that's one way to make the village sound utterly badass.

This is awesome. I may never close this tab on my browser, it is just that great.

Wow. This was amazing/splendid/spectacular/fantastic/brilliant/every other positive adjective. This was so powerful and inspirational, I'm pretty sure if you changed it from Konoha to a country that would become its national speech. 5/5 stars

This is an awesome Konoha fic. The end of it sounds a lot like Anthem, by Ayn Rand, but more inspired. Good job, man.

Love it

Jesus Christ.

I am green with envy right now. This is BEAUTIFUL.

Really cool!

This was beautiful. I saw this years ago (like three), but i just found this again. It's... amazing. It's also very patriotic. I really like your writing style. It's very dramatic. I only wished you capitalized the first letter at the beginning of every first word in the parentheses. But yes, this makes me want to shout out for Konohagakure.

I bid you adieu,
Shuiro9