Oh, this is absolutely delightful! I can just hear it all happening in my head. You know your characters very well and it shows!

Love jealous sulky Gibbs! Especially when Franks is about coz he then ups his flirting deliberately coz he knows Gibbs will rise to it! Superb mix of honest emotion, playfulness, and a typical Abby reaction at the end when she figured it all out and took the initiative! Loved it...

Tee Hee. I absolutely LOVE this one. Gotta love it when a man makes an effort to make something special and has an unexpected visitor nix his plans...well for a while anyway. I loved Abby's reactions when she figured it all out.

And I LOVED Gibbs' MY HOUSE, MY RULES! :-) Gotta love it.

Thanks again.

Mag

i really like this story

this is a great story

hahahha perfect great job

SWEET! Loved it when Gibbs stepped in front of Abby to protect her when the door banged open and I liked how you wrote Mike, will there be a follow up story, maybe from Mike's POV? Keep up the great work! :-)

A.M.A.Z.I.N.G.

Jealous Gibbs is dang near caveman except with a tender side. This was good. Enjoyable read.

Amazing story! As usual. Yes, Im jealous of your talent AND your purple shoes!

Great story x

great one :) love it!

Excellent job, loved it. Almost perfect...will be perfect with another update. Let's see how load they can get! ;)

Super cute! Love Mike.

Love it! Hey Gibbs, get Franks a little more drunk and you won't have to worry at all! And a second chapter to this or a followup story would be Wonderful. Great writing as Always!