Great work! I love this description and perspective.

I liked this. Interesting take on how Neal became, well...Neal. Nicely done.

I like your take on Neal.

That aside, and the fact that I like what you've written (I read them all), what exactly do you PUT in that bread? OTC pain relievers just don't seem sufficient cause, somehow!

loved the story keep writing

This is wonderful. I love the way you cut from age to age, growing on how he became who he became. But even though you cut it was seamless _. Really lovely, and the ending scene was the thing I loved most ] ~Nayah

Like it.

Brilliant! Favorited. I'm looking forward to reading more from you.

I love Neal with a tragic childhood. I also loved the idea of Neal being so self made and that fortunate meeting with Moz.

Kate as a hooker I liked also.

Neal coming home was the best of all.

Love love love love love. I especially love point of view of Neal as a child, you've got it to be so authentic.

What is this?

It's freaking amazing is what it is.

*favorites*