Nicely put-together horror short. Well-crafted.

Creepy

Wow! That was creepy! Well thought out and written, but creepy! Great job with the story. I like how you think outside the box. You would make a fantastic horror or mystery writer. This story excellently manages to walk a fine line between reality and horror. I just hope nobody ever lets Alexander out. He sounds like he's going to be the next dark tosser...

Good story

Great job

Good one.

I think this boy's cheese slid off his cracker

Wow

OooOh ! Please tell me lots of people heard George speaks with the bastards ! I mean, not EVERYONE would have been at the memorial yet and the incident happened in the middle of the street, just in front of Gringotts ! Gringotts' guards for one will have heard them... And enjoyed the show.

I'm sorry for Alexander though, HE did not chose this, was raised appart from humanity which is quite cruel for a child and became a murderer due to his parents.

Nothing wrong with what Dumbledore did. Life of one childgenerations of children. It sucks but it is what it is. Only stupid sheltered people who've never had to make a touch decision in their lives would think Dumbledore evil.

did you ever make a sequel or followup to this?

Wow, brilliant, brilliant writing here honey! I loved this but wish that there was more of it! ;o)

Awesome

A splendid revenge. Terrible pity about Vernnon though. Nice twist with Zacharias' parents. To have the parents in Azkaban and the son in the insane ward is fitting, it can't be too harsh.

TGM

poor Alexander