Though I don't like that once again you've written Bella out as a prostitute, at least here I can't judge her due to circumstances.
This story was sad yet very sweet. Really enjoyed reading this one.

I shouldn't have been so quick to post my previous reviews (on your other stories) because though I meant them as constructive criticism, they came out as anything but.
Regardless, you're a talented writer, even if I don't agree with some of your story lines.

I read this long ago, put it on my favorite list and didn't leave a review. I'm rereading my favorites that are Christmas stories. This is a wonderful one shot. Like the way he transitions from following his singer to his curiosity about her and wanting to protect her. Would be interested in seeing this expanded. Thanks for sharing.

My train just pulled up to the station for work, and I have a big lump in my throat. Loved it!

This is beautifully written. Thanks

Thanks for writing this nice little story.

:)

is this supposed to be a oneshot? it certainly doesn't feel finished.. - please continue!

$40 dollars? what year is this?

Simply beautiful.
Thank you!
Jennifer

This was so lovely- I know you wrote it ages ago, but I wish you would continue it!

Such a beautiful story.

Oh, i don't know how i missed this oneshot for so long. I like how you write a complete story in so few words. While, sure, i'd love to read more about how he became a benefactor to Bella and her family, the place you left it was just as appropriate. Someone will have their faith restored in miracles, come morning.

Good stuff.

KC.

Love this, really wish there was more : )

Expand?

Great lil o/s!