hi i have been reading your story and i am very interested i really do hope there is more to. please don't tell me that you are leaving it like this poor jasper he is my Favourite character

please post more chapters its 2014

good story :) please update soon? :)

I liked your description of the baby girl it paints a clear picture it is very good

Yay! New chapter u should update more often (when u can) cause this story is so amazing, completely in love with it. I hope Aro doesn't like take Serina because of her awesomenous power (maybe u can dwell a story on that idea if they don't kill her which i hope doesn't happen)and as another reviewier said, alice killing maria her self, i agree, sounds like it's leading up too it anyways, good chapter happy reader! D

New chapter! And nice one too. I was so mad at Maria earlier, but now let me sugest that Alice literaly end her life. I hope you update soon because I want to know what happens next.

can you please wright more. i need to know what happenes next. it is really good. love the name you gave their child. please wright more.

LOL, "My, my Whitlock, you have been busy now haven't ya'll?" ,

I love that line, you are a creative genius to use that line like you did. Maria's back and I love it, it adds more drama. Can't wait for more so update when you can which better be really fast. _

Love this book. Why do you have to end it I wish you could writ for hours with out stoping:)

Oooo! a cliffie! Nice chapter! can't wait for the next one! :)

You are full of surprises. I didn't expect this one. You have to update soon. :)

GREAT CHAPTER. I THINK THAT THE NEXT ONE WILL BE AN EXCITING ONE. UPDATE SOON.

update fast please

oh my this is good, but please don't have anything happen to the Cullen's or Serena

Good story. I subcribed to the story.