I love all your works but this is my favorite! I love the build up to the actual relationship. The characters stay true to form. Well done!

This story was bloody fantastic. I was so upset at finding out how the author chose to end things. The characters here are very well written and fit in well with the universe it is supposed to inhabit. Will definitely read again

Challenge accepted but really Rachel is so slow

Great story I'm writing one too .
later

you are the Ravy queen. Great job!

Wow, the polar bears had me coughing in laughter. Haha, Rachel was such a coward, but she was courageous. I love how you built the tension up with the flirtatious comments and body language.

This is one of the best happy Ravy fics ever!

I can't believe I haven't gotten around to reading this before :D

I just have so many nice things to say about it I can't think of them all XD

Have I mentioned recently that you're my favourite? :)

Yet again you write how the books should have! You are an amazing writer!

Great fic, thank u so much.

Everytime i get ticked off at what happens in the books i read a fic like this.

The world would b a depressing place without fanfiction.

I so love your Rachel/Ivy ficlets. Please continue to write many more.

-Berry

I'm sad to see it end, but I do love the ending.

-Kate

Ooooo... That was an amazing end, and an excellent story in general, one of the best lemon chapters I've read to date, perfect amount of action, and dialogue. You once again astound me with your writing abilities :) keep up the good work!

:) wonderful!

I hope you write another Rachel/Ivy fiction, a very very long one cause your writing is amazing and I can't get enough :)

Again, wondeful I say!

Shoot..wish this happened in the actual story instead of KH being a tease with them lol great final chapter.