Carter's child, I assume? xD Very original! I almost backed out, thinking it was just Aerrow's thoughts on the events of the first episode (it was well written, but I just wasn't that interested). I decided to stick around, though, on the grounds that you're a very talented writer. I'm glad I did. Go, Red Eagles!

I have to say, at the end I was grinning like a maniac!

I kept thinking - this must be Aerrow... wait, this must be lightning strike... but it doesnt match... so it must be Aerrow... but that's not quite right either... mabye Ace... thats not right either...

Lolz. Anyway.. you get my point.

It was epic :)

Please keep up the good work!

luv kbrow144

The Red Eagles? The originality of this made me grin. I like when people take a look at the other squadrons. The concept of this is fantastic; you never do get to find out what happens to the Red Eagles in the show. I'm glad to see that Atmosia gets another squadron. It's also interesting to see that they're like the opposite of the Storm Hawks. Aerrow and the others have a lot to live up to, while on the other hand, the Red Eagles must instead live down their reputations of being traitors. Very nice.

Nice job. I love how you keep me wondering who the narrator is until the ending. Nice use of metaphors, too. Hope to see more soon.

~Underwaterwriter